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You plopped onto the couch and imediately looked at your chubbiness. How you hated being fat. Other girls mocking you with their skinny waists, curvy figures, and can eat anything with out gaining a pound. But your boyfriend, Ludwig, insists your not fat. He says he loves how cute you are with it. You even asked why he was with you, and he replied with a simple, "because your beautiful and i love you".

"(name) vanna lick zhe spoon zhat haz zhe frosting?" he asked from the kitchen
"No thank you Ludwig" you replied

Then you heard the fumbling of pots, then a series of feet coming towards you. This told you that your boyfriend was coming to you. You buried your face into a pillow you grabbed. You then felt the couch shift next to you and hands take hold of yours, causing the silk pillow to fall in you lap. You opened your eyes, (color eyes) meeting blue ones. He was next to you, leaning over to meet your face with his.

"(name) vhats vrong?" he asked calmly, but you could see the worry in his eyes
"n-nothing Luddy" you faked a smile
"Come on (Name), tell me" he said as he caressed your cute puffy cheeks
You gave a sigh, "Fine, its just that I'm on a diet and i don't wanna ruin the diet route with sweets" you said and closed your eyes.
It was his turn to sigh," lieben (love) vhy are you on a diet?"
"Luddy look at me! I'm fat and ugly! Plus I don't know why your with me! I know you love me, but why?!" you asked, tears forming in your eyes
"lieben, i love you for vho you are. Your zweet, caring, zmart, und your very beautiful. other vomen are mean and only look for money and looks." he said calmly, but you knew he was worried as heck.

You felt some tear fall. His words really touched you. You felt him wipe your tears off with his thumbs, and give you a kiss on each cheek, continuing till both your lips met. You gasped a bit, but closed your eyes and wrapped your arms around his neck, letting a couple of tears fall. He let go of your face and wrapped his arms around your waist, putting each leg on either side of your thighs, straddling you. After few more minutes of the kiss, both of you broke away, panting. He rested his forehead on yours and looked into your (color eye) eyes.

"I Love Only You, (name)"
this is for :iconyukirat:
she requested this so here it is girl!
hope you love it x3

Germany- Hetalia
You- Germany
Story- Me
Request- YukiRat

edit: omg 116 favs in one month?! you guys are awesome!!!! heres some cookies!!! :iconcookieplz:
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:iconrj223:
Rj223 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2015
DAMNIT WHY CANT YOU BE REAL?
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:iconcinnabae:
cinnabae Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
doitsu, you can't stop me from losing weight >:I
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xOtakutaliax Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014   General Artist
This made me feel better about myself, but damnit why isn't my Luddy real? Why? Anyway I love this!
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2014  Student General Artist
Dude, ive been asking that my self for years. 
ANd Im glad you feel happy and like it :D
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xOtakutaliax Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014   General Artist
Ikr! Damn it! :icongermanblushplz:
I don't like it... I love it! :D
Kesesese~!
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Student General Artist
:D IM GLAD YOU LOVE IT THEN 
Honononononononon~
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xOtakutaliax Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014   General Artist
Fusosososo~
HAH I ALWAYS WILL DA ZE~!
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lullabyly Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student General Artist
awwwwwwwwww
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student General Artist
Glad you like :)
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lullabyly Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student General Artist
I love it!!!
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student General Artist
XD Good!
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Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
how sweet can he get?
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student General Artist
really fucking sweet like a 300lb cake made of candy
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:iconmochi-and-2p-rose:
Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student General Artist
XD
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:iconmochi-and-2p-rose:
Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
you deserve a gilbird
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student General Artist
BOOYAH
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:iconmochi-and-2p-rose:
Mochi-and-2P-Rose Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
rotflol
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Student General Artist
XD
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smudgethedoggie Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014
I loved it reading this really makes me feel better! <3
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2014  Student General Artist
Im glad you liked it hun :3 <3
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smudgethedoggie Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Hehe ♥♥♡♥♡ ●◇●
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AndyPandicorn Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student Writer
Is it bad that I laughed when reader chan said, "LOOK AT ME! IM FAT AND UGLY!"

I'm fat too, I kinda just imagined myself looking really lazy and messy. LOL. Great Story by the way!
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student General Artist
lol since your chubby i dont think it is bad, honestly ^^;
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:iconizzylovesanime:
IzzyLovesAnime Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I CAN'T STOP MY GRIN!!! HELP ME!
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student General Artist
XD ((Nicole: Think Od Dead Things :D))
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IzzyLovesAnime Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thnk you kind friend. *bows*
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student General Artist
((Nicole: Your Welcome :D))
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:iconizzylovesanime:
IzzyLovesAnime Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is your picture a weeping angel? If I'm wrong please don't get mad!
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Yup it is :3
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:iconizzylovesanime:
IzzyLovesAnime Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cool beans bro!!
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Thx XD
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Ev231 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013  Student General Artist
Awesome!
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student General Artist
thx ^^
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Ev231 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student General Artist
Ur welcome!
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2013  Student General Artist
:3
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shields-and-stripes Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yay for chubby reader inserts! Great story!

The sad thing is that there's a weight loss add on my screen while I'm reading this. Oh well. The struggle never ends... >_>
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student General Artist
thanks!

oh wow XD
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crazyshygrrrl Featured By Owner May 4, 2013
Finally! Somebody did something for the big girls; thank you for writing this and keep writing as well
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner May 4, 2013  Student General Artist
lol no prob gurl. if you wait about another month or maybe two (not sure) i will be starting a series with chubby reader inserts, since you seem very interested and gratefull about this one.

oh btw, the for the fav + watch ^^
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Kaosu-to-Anaki Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student Artist
His accent is wunderbar
And a wunderbar story too
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner May 2, 2013  Student General Artist
thx and thx XD
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vampireknightjunky Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love reading the hetalia character x chubby reader fanfics because it makes me, a chubby girl, feel less left out :3 I can daydream properly with these kind of fanfics
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student General Artist
AW! im really glad you like reading them!
oh and this might make you even happier im gonna make a whole series with a chubby reader and hetalia and some other animes :3
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zimantha87 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Wow. I am loving this accent.
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student General Artist
lol i love it too XD
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AbsolutGermanyFangrl Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm a bit chubby, and this made me tear up....more please.
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xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2013  Student General Artist
aww ^^' im thinking on creating a chubbyreader series with the hetalia countries soon, the first one im making is one with Japan then America then in a random order, im even doing a couple with the nordics and a few 2p countries as well
so hold on for that ^^
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((I love this! Please make a Russia one!))
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:iconxxshadowfan2xx:
xXShadowfan2Xx Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013  Student General Artist
im in process of doing some requests and then im making a chubby reader series so it will take a couple months XD
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